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3 Fatal Flaws That Will Ruin Your Scholarship Essay

Posted byUnigo Staff April 19, 2022January 11, 2023

I have had the privilege to sit on several scholarship committees over the years. Lately, it seems as though fewer students are actually reading the guidelines before they submit their applications. I don’t know if they believe that the winners are chosen at random. Or maybe that no one is actually reading the essays? But, after reviewing a recent stack of submissions one thing has become clear. Many students are simply too lazy to follow directions.

Just like most things in life, scholarships come with rules. I know most students abhor them, but scholarship providers don’t simply give away money because students ask nicely for it.

Providers want to know that the investment they are making is a good one and that’s where scholarship guidelines play a part. If students are unwilling to spend the time needed to review the rules and submit a quality essay, they probably won’t be willing to go above and beyond in college, either.

Although that may not be the case for all students, it’s the rationale used by many providers to weed out possible contenders. In general, three fatal flaws that continue to keep most students from reaching the coveted finalists pool.

1. Word Count

I know many students express their frustration over the limitations placed on scholarship essays, but the word count is there for a reason. In most cases, scholarship essays are kept to 500 words or less. It makes it easier for committees to review hundreds (sometimes thousands!) of submissions. It also ensures that students are staying on topic.

It’s also an easy way for scholarship committee members to reject those applicants who failed to read the directions. No matter how brilliant the essay may be, if it doesn’t meet the word count, no one will be reading it. In my experience, more than 20 percent of the applications are disqualified because of this simple rule.

FAQs About How Long An Essay Should Be

How long should a scholarship essay be?

Look at the instructions and DO NOT go over the word or character count that is listed. You will typically be disqualified based on that single issue. If not specified in the scholarship guidelines, assume that shorter is better as long as you are able to succinctly get your point across.

How many paragraphs is a 250-500 word essay?

There is no set number of paragraphs for an essay because it will depend on the essay length and how much you have to say about the topic. For a 250-500 word essay, I would recommend 3-5 paragraphs, but this is just a general guideline.

How many paragraphs is a 900 word essay?

In a 900 word essay, you should aim for 4-5 paragraphs. However, this will depend on the spacing you use in your essay and how much you have to say about the topic.

Grammar Mistakes2. Grammar

One of the quickest ways to lose a scholarship is to submit an essay riddled with grammatical errors. Even if you are not a strong writer, you can still avoid this critical mistake by proofreading your essay thoroughly or having someone else review it for you.

I blame Twitter for derailing many students in this area. So many have grown accustomed to fitting in 140 characters in their everyday conversations that it seems to have filtered into their scholarship essays, as well.

I cannot tell you how many times I have come across someone using the lowercase ‘i’ instead of the appropriate version, not to mention all the acronyms littering the page; OMG, it’s enough to make me SMH!

Another area to watch – spelling errors! Many are obvious keystroke errors, but simply having another set of eyes proofread the essay would save many students from this fatal flaw. Many scholarship reviewers use the baseball rule when it comes to grammatical errors; 1-2-3 and you’re out!

Scholarship Heartbreak3. Wrong Response

I know I have mentioned in previous posts that students should work smarter by reusing some of their previous work. That does not mean, however, submitting an essay that has nothing to do with the scholarship prompt.

For example, an essay about the zombie apocalypse probably shouldn’t be used for an essay about ice cream. As a reviewer, nothing is more frustrating than coming across a submission that was obviously meant for another scholarship program. It basically screams, ‘I want the money, but I don’t want to work for it.’

Another way to ruin your essay is to stray off topic. Scholarship essays are usually short, so you need to make sure that every word counts. When writing your essay, be sure to answer the question that is being asked and stay on topic. Also, avoid using filler words or phrases just to reach the minimum word count. Admissions committees can spot filler words a mile away, and they will not be impressed.

Another fatal flaw, students who write why they deserve a scholarship or list all of the hardships in their life; unless the scholarship provider specifically asked for this information, students need to stick to the script and stay on topic. They may think that it will tug at the scholarship committee’s heart strings (and sometimes it does), but if their essays do not answer the scholarship prompt, they’ll be headed for the rejection pile.

So many students complain about not winning scholarships, but if more would take a few moments to review the guidelines and learn to stick to the rules, I think they would have a better chance at actually earning some cash for college. It’s amazing how many never even take the time to edit their work before hitting the submit button. Clearly, these students don’t value the scholarship committee’s time, so why should we feel inclined to provide them with a scholarship? In most cases, the students who put forth their best efforts (and pay attention!) will earn the scholarship rewards.

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